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Animesh JainAIR 63

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भारत-भूमंडलीकरण ने भारत में बच्चों के लिए नई अवसरों के साथ-साथ चुनौतियां भी उत्पन्न की हैं। परीक्षण कीजिए। Globalisation has brought new opportunities as well as challenges for children in India. Examine. (Answer in 250 words)

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Introduction

Globalisation after it the process of shrinking of time and space leading to interchange of ideas goods and people.

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Main Body

Opportunities for children from globalisation :

1Global exposure to education and learning 9 courage provide course from best mentors around world.
2Modern value inculcation like nationalism, scientific temperament et leading to innovative & child entrepreneurs.
3Access to technology like social media causing interaction with diverse people => upright during new => tolerance.
6girl child ensrue value of equality thereby empowering her to drive by & experi to role models like Gita Gopinath (IMF).
6Raise voice against injustice/violence 9 # MeToo against child rape

Challenges for children :

1Online harassment as seen in case of cyber bullying / stalking.
2exposure to sensitive content like child pornography leading to objectification of women.
3Cultural alienation caused due to disconnect with Indian values/ethos & celebrating friendship day over Rakhi.

These negative effects of globalisation need to be tackled through greater parent-child interacting, use of regulatory powers by government (& child locks) and awareness generation among children.

7Lovability empowerment with peace on faced needs, leading to loss of confidence.
8exposure to harmful gases causing attention deficit 9 blue whale challenge, [illegible]
6Strengthen marches of deprived leading to perpetual disappointment causing anxiety.
7Wrong value inculcation through OTT platform majority of objectification of women.

— Animesh Jain · AIR 63

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Conclusion

These negative effects of globalisation need to be tackled through greater parent-child interacting, use of regulatory powers by government (& child locks) and awareness generation among children.

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  • Balanced approach with opportunities and challenges
  • Contemporary examples with Gita Gopinath and MeToo
  • Covers both positive and negative aspects

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Salient features of Indian Society

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and children

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