Introduction
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Main Body
Effects on the youth in India:
(i) Increased educational opportunities - Large no. of Indian students in USA, Canada etc
(ii) Increasing employment opportunities - Hard Data Point: 200/. increase in income after migration, others
(iii) Technology even provides cultured exposure - Positive, domestic attitudes towards women
(iv) Improved & choice in goods, services
But there are many negative effects:
(i) Increasing individualism - through Westernization in culture - HTTP across global Loveless Epidemic - ageing parents
(ii) Consumerism- there is at the aspirational value leads to poor health outcomes - Increasing E-waste - Indian top nation
(iii) Loss Confusion in identity - national &s ethnic is cosmopolitan identity
(iv) Inequality, increased competition - few limited jobs in top companies - otherwise vast informal sector
— MEGHNA CHAKARAVORTY · AIR 79
Conclusion
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- Clear enumeration of positive effects
- Specific examples (USA, Canada)
- Acknowledges both benefits and negative impacts
- Data point included
MEGHNA CHAKARAVORTY
Effects of Globalization on Indian society
Globalisation and technology
Youth and Employment
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