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Question 2.(a)ExplainGS4GS1

As professionals, civil servants are career-focused and are also self-interested. At the same time, their service ethos imposes an obligation to serve the public interest selflessly. Is it possible for a civil servant to reconcile career and service obligation? Explain your position.

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Introduction

Atman mohaksthom Jagathayyatha (For the salvation of individual self as per the wellbeing of all) this motto of Ramkrishna Mission can be equally applied for civil services as it provides unique excellent opportunity for both individual growth & societal development.

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Main Body

Possibility to reconcile both career & service obligations:

1Dedication to public service at all levels & also as a means for career growth in Indian civil services
The excellent public servants who achieve unthinkable are always recognized by the government ex: Civil Justice award awards
2Compassionate & efficient civil servants doing their served sufficiently are always respected
The government

ex: Compassionate & efficient civil servants doing their served sufficiently are always [illegible]

Possibility to reconcile both career & service obligations:

1Dedication to public service at all end in is also a means for career growth in Indian civil services
The excellent public servants who achieve unthinkable are always recognized by the government

ex: Civil Service award awards

2Compassionate & efficient civil servants doing their served sufficiently are always respected by the government

ex: Civil Justice award awards

3Compassionate & efficient civil servants doing their served sufficiently are always

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GS4GS1

Topic

Ethics

Career vs service obligation

Balancing self-interest and public interest

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196

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3

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Philosophical, attempting to reconcile tensions

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As a senior officer in the Ministry, you have access to important policy decisions and upcoming big announcements such as road construction projects before they are notified in the public domain. The Ministry is about to announce a mega road project for which the drawings are already in place. Sufficient care was taken by the planners to make use of the government land with the minimum land acquisition from private parties. The compensation rate for private parties was also finalized as per government rules. Care was also taken to minimize deforestation. Once the project is announced, it is expected that there will be a huge spurt in real estate prices in and around that area. Meanwhile, the Minister concerned insists that you realign the road in such a way that it comes closer to his 20-acre farmhouse. He also suggests that he would facilitate the purchase of a big plot of land in your wife’s name at the prevailing rate which is very nominal, in and around the proposed mega road project. He also tries to convince you by saying that there is no harm in it as he is buying the land legally. He even promises to supplement your savings in case you do not have sufficient funds to buy the land. However, by the act of realignment, a lot of agricultural lands has to be acquired, thereby causing a considerable financial burden on the government, and also the displacement of the farmers. As if this is not enough, it will involve cutting down of a large number of trees denuding the area of its green cover. Faced with this situation, what will you do? Critically examine various conflicts of interest and explain what your responsibilities are as a public servant.

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