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from becoming visible at workplace, but no such legislation applies to the workplace household.
2Implicit patriarchy at workplace due to greater application of laws: e.g. application of the POSJ Act prevents patriarchy
3Higher violence at home than at workplace due to privacy offered at home and as opposed to action taken at workplace: e.g. domestic violence.
4Differential private and public morals: i.e. an man can be very conceivable and empowering at the workplace but the same principles may not apply at home.
5Added advantage of financial empowerment at workplace makes a woman more confident in standing up against it whereas, at home lack of other opportunities may render a woman powerless as to counter act discrimination.
Thus, patriarchy is a vice in many forms. It must be attacked in all places to truly get rid of the ideological misconception of truly empower the women of India.
— Srishti Mishra · AIR 95
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- Systematic analysis of differences
- References legal framework (POSJ Act)
- Identifies role of financial independence
- Addresses violence and safety dimensions
- Discusses public-private distinction
- Strong concluding statement
- Advocates for systemic change
- Emphasizes need for multifaceted approach
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Topper
Srishti Mishra
AIR 952023
Subject & Paper
GS1GS1
Topic
Role of Women and Women's Organization, Population and Associated Issues
Patriarchy and Gender Dynamics
Patriarchy Impact on Workplace vs Household
Writing Stats
150
Total words
5
Paragraphs
concluding and prescriptive
Tone