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Discuss the contribution of socio-religious movement during pre-independence period in: a) Creation of national consciousness b) Emancipation of women

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Socio-Religious movements that started in 19th century were path-breaking in many senses and impacted social, cultural, political environment in pre-independent India

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Socio-Religious movements that started in 19th century were path-breaking in many senses and impacted social, cultural, political environment in pre-independent India

a) Creation of national consciousness

1Reformist movement under Hinduism philosophy, class warpi inside Arya samaj brought nation belief of Alanda-Blasant. (cultural nationalism) This philosophy later inspired Swarajists and many leaders like Lala Lajpat Rai, BG Tilak etc.

2Modern education spread by reformist like Brahma Samaj, Ramakrishna Mission, DAV schools helped in taking inspiration from European nationalism

3Creating feeling of common economic by treating businesses, which make misicnaries us outsiders.

4Role of press, railways & telegraph helped social responses to spread common ideas all across India

b) Emancipation of women

1Brahma Samaj, under Rajiv Ram Rohan Roy led to Abolition of Sati Act 1829

2Female differential being made illegal and gradually pursued by social reformers

3I civicized led social movement for without Remarriage, even made govt. passed legislation on the same. (without Remarriage Act 1855)

4Savitribai Phule (say a schoolist Samaj of Jyotiba Phule) led to education spread among women.

BAP's class helped in women education.

— Abhinav J Jain · AIR 14

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BAP's class helped in women education.

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Socio-Religious movements that started in 19th century were path-breaking in many senses and impacted social, cultural, political environment in pre-independent India

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a) Creation of national consciousness

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Brahma Samaj, under Rajiv Ram Rohan Roy led to Abolition of Sati Act 1829

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Emancipation of women

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BAP's class helped in women education.

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Contribution to national consciousness and women's emancipation

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