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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 2Critically AnalyseGS1GS1

Gender wage disparity in India highlights not only the gender bias in the society, but also, an institutional effort to reinforce the same. Critically Analyse.

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The labour force participation Rate is 21% for women in India according to LFR (2017)

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The labour force participation Rate is 21% for women in India according to LFR (2017)

The one of many reasons for such a low LFR is wage disparity

According to reports, an India women gets only 67% of her male counterpart for same work.

This is due to the patriarchal nature of Indian society where women has always been considered a weaker sex.

This concept of women as weaker by giving low wages for same work reinforces the stereotype and makes it look natural to institutionalise it.

— Preetam Kumar · AIR 9

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  • Identifies key statistics
  • Links wage disparity to patriarchy

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The one of many reasons for such a low LFR is wage disparity

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Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

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GS1GS1

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Social Issues

Role of Women

Gender wage disparity

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