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Preetam KumarAIR 9

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What do you understand by women empowerment? How can it be achieved in social, political and economic spheres?

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women empowerment is said to have been achieved when women can dream freely and also take measures to fulfill those dreams with their own Capability

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women empowerment is said to have been achieved when women can dream freely and also take measures to fulfill those dreams with their own Capability

women in India has been subjugated in all spheres of life like social, political and economic.

Economic empowerment

Freedom for a women to work as per her choice

To have a say in spending her salary and running the house economically

To have equal wage for equal work as per wage equal wage

The elimination of Pundan will empower women economically too

The shedding of patriarchal domain - they will let her get educated for the job she desires

# Political empowerment

Increase in seat in Lok Sabha (from current 14%) will allow women to take decision for them selves
Gender sensitive issues and perspective will be involved in all decisions
This will send a strong message to male and inspire all females in the country.

It is the high time to give women what she has been deprived of for so long and achieve SDGs

— Preetam Kumar · AIR 9

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It is the high time to give women what she has been deprived of for so long and achieve SDGs

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  • Clear definition
  • Covers economic and political spheres
  • Mentions SDGs

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It is the high time to give women what she has been deprived of...

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Women empowerment

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